Thursday 21 December 2017

Week One Day One Activity Two

To my friends I m still on the waka. I haven't had any food for days There have been no fish around where I am I dont know where I am but I can see a mountain. I am very cold and thirsty. I might not survive the night...
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  1. Ruby SLJ21 December 2017 at 15:44

    Hi Liam,

    My name's Ruby and I will be one of the people blogging with you during the Summer Learning Journey.

    Wow! What a great imagination you have! I like how you have talked about being thirsty as the original settlers may have run out of fresh water and had to drink the ocean water when they were sailing to New Zealand.

    I wonder what sorts of things you are feeling. Would you be feeling sad? Perhaps you are afraid if you think you will not survive the night.

    This is a great letter, keep up the good work.
    Cheers,
    Ruby.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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