You didn't explain why the people came from the hospital to talk to your class - it would be interesting to readers to find out why.
When you are writing the names of places you need to make sure that the spelling is correct and that the name of a place starts with a capital letter. So, your first sentence should end with Christchurch Hospital - not "chrichurch hostipal"!.
You also need to check that you didn't press the wrong key when you were writing your blog as its important to type in the words correctly.
Check the spelling for the word Responce and also for the word presher in the last line - I think you mean pressure.
Hi Liam
ReplyDeleteYou didn't explain why the people came from the hospital to talk to your class - it would be interesting to readers to find out why.
When you are writing the names of places you need to make sure that the spelling is correct and that the name of a place starts with a capital letter. So, your first sentence should end with Christchurch Hospital - not "chrichurch hostipal"!.
You also need to check that you didn't press the wrong key when you were writing your blog as its important to type in the words correctly.
Check the spelling for the word Responce and also for the word presher in the last line - I think you mean pressure.
Grannie Marianne