This week we made pizzas! The reason we made the pizzas is because we went to Harold. The pizzas were very yummy. On the pizzas, we could choose any type of topping. There was meat, dairy and vegetables that we could use. I reckon the best part about the pizzas was eating them!
The pizzas look really yummy Liam, next time you come to see me you could make some for Bob and I.
ReplyDeleteI have some comments and questions re your blog posting though.
Firstly, it isn't clear why you were posting this, what was the task you had to do?
Remember, its important to let your audience know why you are writing your responses!
Was your task to design a pizza recipe?
Or was it make a pizza from the ingredients you were given?
Or was it something else?
What is a DLO? At the top of your blog post you have typed in "Do a DLO".
Lastly, who or what is Harold??
Look forward to your feedback and keep cooking, your pizzas look really delicious.