I would spend 300 mill by putting 200 mill in the savings and spend 10 Mill on a mansion 25 mill on entertainment 15 mill on donations and 50 mill on saving the world
Hey Liam, Nice you want to help people but so we can understand more of what you are writing about it might be a good idea to start your response to the tasks by telling us what the task is. For example you could start your response by saying " The latest task i have is to write about what I would do if I inherited $300 million."
I have enjoyed reading about how you would spend Peter Jackson's $300 million!
I think that Marianne has given you some great feedback, it is really nice if readers have a little bit of background to what you are posting about so they are able to pick up exactly what you are putting down...if you catch my drift! :)
I like that you are planning to put some money into savings! (very clever as with that amount of money I am sure it would set you up for life!)
I am interested to hear what the entertainment you might buy would be? And about your 25 million dollar mansion! WOW! Where would it be? What kind of rooms or fun things would it have?
I am also really excited about the prospect of having $50 million donated to saving the world (very kind of you!)
This is a very thoughtful response to this activity Liam, well done! Ellee :)
Hey Liam, Nice you want to help people but so we can understand more of what you are writing about it might be a good idea to start your response to the tasks by telling us what the task is. For example you could start your response by saying " The latest task i have is to write about what I would do if I inherited
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Hi Liam!
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed reading about how you would spend Peter Jackson's $300 million!
I think that Marianne has given you some great feedback, it is really nice if readers have a little bit of background to what you are posting about so they are able to pick up exactly what you are putting down...if you catch my drift! :)
I like that you are planning to put some money into savings! (very clever as with that amount of money I am sure it would set you up for life!)
I am interested to hear what the entertainment you might buy would be?
And about your 25 million dollar mansion! WOW! Where would it be? What kind of rooms or fun things would it have?
I am also really excited about the prospect of having $50 million donated to saving the world (very kind of you!)
This is a very thoughtful response to this activity Liam, well done!
Ellee :)
thanks for the great comment. Liam
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