Friday 4 August 2017

Dog!



2 comments:

  1. Hi Liam. I like the dog you have made and the way you have followed the instructions. Next time think about your blog post and the information that you are giving your reader. What did you find difficult? What was easy?

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  2. Hi Liam, I love the fact that you have mastered the origami dog, I can't do the most simplest ones so it's nice to see what you have achieved.
    Just a comment about the blue background with white print......the font you have chosen is very thin and hard too see in white against the blue background, maybe next time you could look at a thicker or bolder font - using white is ok but a different font can make it much easier for your older followers like me to read. If you experiment with your fonts and colours you will see what I mean.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.