Kia Ora Liam, it's Kyra here. It looks like you have started on your main star for this term! I like your idea of the stop motion animation because it shows that you can do stuff digitally. This reminds me of doing my main star in the weekend. Maybe next time you could tell the reader what materials you used. He Whetu Koe! (You're a star!)
Kia Ora Liam I really like your flotation device have you tried it out? next time you could check for capital letters and full stops in your sentience. From Leah
Kia Ora Liam It's Levi C I. Loved your video of building a RAF I think it was ka mau te wehi (awesome). Maybe next time you could work on some more full stops. Did you enjoy makeing the video.
Kia Ora Liam, it's Kyra here. It looks like you have started on your main star for this term! I like your idea of the stop motion animation because it shows that you can do stuff digitally. This reminds me of doing my main star in the weekend. Maybe next time you could tell the reader what materials you used. He Whetu Koe! (You're a star!)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the positive feedback Kyra.
DeleteKia Ora Liam I really like your flotation device have you tried it out? next time you could check for capital letters and full stops in your sentience. From Leah
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Liam It's Levi C I. Loved your video of building a RAF I think it was ka mau te wehi (awesome). Maybe next time you could work on some more full stops. Did you enjoy makeing the video.
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