Tuesday, 3 November 2015

Random Tuesday Descriptive Writing



The bath is all mucky and dirty on the out side of thr bath the tap is all rusty but thr inside is all clean so some one can have a bath there is wooden stables that have a slight curve so the bath is not touching the ground. The cabnet is tall with loads of lanterns in it so you can see in the night there is house lights hanging froom the top of the roof so the place look nice. There is plane grey bricks so it  is not soft so the bath and the cabnet can't sink. The green leafs are good because it is secret and the rain can't get in if it is wet.
Who doesn't dream of bathing outdoors? But it's also nice to have a nook for privacy.:

2 comments:

  1. Awesome descriptions Liam, If you read it without the picture, it is easy to visualize.

    Remember to check for spelling and gramma, also the image doesn't seem to show, you may need to ask Miss Panther for help inserting it again.

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    1. Hi Miss Panther,

      I have emailed the screenshot to Liam to forward to you.

      Cheers
      Matt

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