The bath is all mucky and dirty on the out side of thr bath the tap is all rusty but thr inside is all clean so some one can have a bath there is wooden stables that have a slight curve so the bath is not touching the ground. The cabnet is tall with loads of lanterns in it so you can see in the night there is house lights hanging froom the top of the roof so the place look nice. There is plane grey bricks so it is not soft so the bath and the cabnet can't sink. The green leafs are good because it is secret and the rain can't get in if it is wet.
Awesome descriptions Liam, If you read it without the picture, it is easy to visualize.
ReplyDeleteRemember to check for spelling and gramma, also the image doesn't seem to show, you may need to ask Miss Panther for help inserting it again.
Thanks for the feedback! I can see the picture so can you send a screenshot of what you see so we can figure out what the problem might be.
DeleteOur writing today was a quick exercise about description so grammar and spelling isn't our main focus but we will have some time tomorrow to correct any typos or grammar mistakes. Thanks for leaving comments on Liam's blog!
Miss Panther
Hi Miss Panther,
DeleteI have emailed the screenshot to Liam to forward to you.
Cheers
Matt