Thursday 7 May 2015

Main star own choice



















          I made it in on day  and I made it in four hours I made it out of polastiring and army men and I
        got rocks sand tree leafs I used mach sticks I put a blown up person in the water 
                                             (can you see him).

          By Liam b

4 comments:

  1. This model was very well made Liam,very good detail!!

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  2. Its a good representation of the hills and cliffs around Gallipoli Liam. Imagine how hard it must have been for the soldiers trying to climp up those hills whilst being shot at.

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  3. A very good model Liam. When you describe how you made the model don't forget to put punctuation in your description. Perhaps you could ask someone else to check your proof reading as sometimes it's easy to miss mistakes when you are in a hurry.
    Grandma Marianne

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  4. Nana and Grandad Wilson16 May 2015 at 15:01

    Cool model Liam! It must have taken you a while to make it. We can see men in the water but are not sure we can see the blown up person.

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