Tuesday 5 May 2015

ANZAC poem

Poppies are red that people lie in and only grow there by them self in flanders field. There’s metal and lot’s of bullets in flanders field. There’s bumps and holes in flanders field.

By Liam Belcher

6 comments:

  1. hi liam, your poem isnt showing. i think your background colour is the same colour as the text. can you fix it so we can read it?

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  2. i realy like this poem liam. do you know what country flanders is in?

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  3. Hi Liam, you have written an amazing poem. Good use of descriptive words, you have really captured the readers imagination! Well done.

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  4. Yes,sometimes the background confuses the text.Good on you though,youfixed it

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  5. Cool Poem Liam!

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